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Title: Another driving Haiku
Post by: deathsled on October 23, 2018, 10:06:24 AM

INTO THE NIGHT

Drive fast into night
Shifting gears never look back
Keep your line of sight.

Richard E.

Title: Re: Another driving Haiku
Post by: GT350Lad on October 23, 2018, 05:50:42 PM

Nicely done

Title: Re: Another driving Haiku
Post by: deathsled on October 23, 2018, 09:27:31 PM

Thanks Lad. Just experimenting with Haiku poetry. It doesn't seem to satisfy like western poetry. It is so short unlike the challenge of a lengthy poem that conveys a message with clever rhymes. Technically Haikus are not supposed to rhyme. and rarely do.

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